Valerius-Blackthorne's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

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It All Depends

Don't you hate people who download your stuff and don't review it. Freakin' leeches! Anyway, I like the actual beat and melody of the piece, it just had that dated sound. Now if you're going for an old computer game style of sound, then you've succeeded. It could certainly be used on a flash app or on a British Television sci fi program. I'm just not into the whole retro sound to a certain degree as I feel the song can make or break whatever it's presented in. Nice note placement though.

johnfn responds:

Indeed I do, it was bugging me as you can see, just check the end of each description :-P. As you mentioned in your other review, a dated sound, I've never heard of something like that before. Hmm... I'll have to do something about that. Thanks for the review.

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I Liked It

I feel like it could be fleshed out more. More instruments. I feel like the previous post may have been a little harsh. I enjoyed the break and some of those lagging breaks that didn't quite seem to belong actually grew on me as a sort of style rather than a mistake. A more agressive drum beat during the, shall we say industrial, part of the track might be cool. It never hurts to add things you wouldn't expect to work. You end up with interesting results.

duksey424 responds:

Na, I'd have to diagree with you. I'm still working with this piece (hence the title) so the title does kind of fit. I just got anexious on putting it on, why i have not the slightest... But I have done some more work to it and once done i plan to repost, hopefully with a title.

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Hmmm

Now if the aim here is to present a song that sounds like something I might hear in a really old Interplay PC game then congratulations. If it's for something modern...it sounds a little dated. Of course, this could easily be incorporated into some small flash game, but even there...it might sound dated. If done on some other media with better instruments, it could be really good. I appreciate the effort though.

[Phantasmal]

Add More Instruments

I enjoyed this piece quite a bit. I think if you threw in some more instuments it would be killer. I like the synthesized sounds but some real strings or even synth ones might add something to it. Good piece of work. Wish there was more.

TheBestFighter responds:

Thanks for this very helpful review!
I agree that I should have added a couple instruments .So, I'll see what I can do about adding instruments. Thanks, again for the review!